Nickels And Dimes

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Re: Nickels And Dimes

Post by rivercitymusic » Sat Nov 22, 2008 10:51 am

Maybe both verse 1 an 2 could be joined?Walking the streetNo bag to packJust my guitar Strapped to my backLooking for a place to sit and call my ownJust a little spot near the cobblestonesDifferent ChorusDon't walk on by Take a load off and restI'm gonna play for you One of my bestTell me mister Am i wasting my timeGuitar case is open Not a nickle or dimejust a different view. seemed like lots of verses that could be joined, keep the meaning but cleaner. and remember, i don't know what i'm doing. i'm just suggesting that's all.Doc

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