No Good Advice.

templar77 · Post by **templar77** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:23 am

Things alately just aint right
am i the only one that feels
the vibe
it's like everybodys losing
sight
and with all thats going on.

I'm going crazy,losing my mind.

CHORUS.

I only feel despair
you keep changing all
the words
even your echo comes back
different
i need to think about it twice
taking no good advice
am i right,well am i right
or am i wrong
cant you tell me whats going on.

Am i the only one to take
a stand
raise up prepare to fight
i know you cant always win
the war
but sometimes thats the
battle plan.

Your sending me crazy,going out of my mind.

CHORUS.

I only feel despair
you keep changing all
the words
even your echo comes back
different
i need to think about it twice
taking no good advice
am i right,well am i right
or am i wrong
cant you tell me whats
going on.

So how can i believe in
what you're saying
when all you tell are lies
your words an empty promise
how long can we survive.

You must think that i'm crazy,
but i'm sure of my mind.

CHORUS.

I only feel despair
you keep changing all
the words
even your echo comes back
different
i need to think about it twice
taking no good advice
am i right,well am i right
or am i wrong
cant you tell me whats going on.

This was about a relationship built on lies,but after closer examination i can see a political side to it too.Although that was'nt my intention.The contridiction in some of the lyrics are, by the way intentional.

AnthonyCeseri · Post by **AnthonyCeseri** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 9:28 am

Hey - I like your line about "your echo comes back different." It's a cool thought.

I think I'd like it if you got into more details in this song. I feel like a lot of it is pretty general. You'd think general would be "more universal" to relate to as a listener, but usually it isn't. Painting a really descriptive story with metaphors and engaging the senses could help a lot. Especially in your verses.

templar77 · Post by **templar77** » Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:57 am

Hi, thanks for taking the time to read my lyrics and leaving a comment.I appreciate your input,i'll take a look and see what i can do. Cheers. Steve

AnthonyCeseri · Post by **AnthonyCeseri** » Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:20 am

templar77 wrote:Hi, thanks for taking the time to read my lyrics and leaving a comment.I appreciate your input,i'll take a look and see what i can do. Cheers. Steve

No problem

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