ONE ANGEL LEFT BEHIND---Good News

[unit58studios]

That is brilliant - Genius I would say Real cuts to the core of a very emotional subject !!My girlfriend is an ex midwife and church goer - I'm gonna send her that.Congratulations and very well done !!!There is room in this world for all types of lyrics !!!Nick Redfordwww.unit58.comwww.unit58studiomusicacademy.co.uk

[bete]

--made me cry. The chorus is lovely. I'd also like to hear when it's set to music.Most of your lyrics are nicely conversational so it bothered me when you used "but the mother we will lose." I'd like to see that conversational also. Thoughts: no one knows what's in store; life isn't in our own hands; it didn't go as we'd planned -- just throwing out ideas that may or may not fit your picture.I wonder if you need the first bridge, musically. Maybe parts of the bridge and current second verse can be combined for the second verse.Bette