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[Luisram8]

Hello guy's this is one of 3 track that a make for this listening:
New Listing ORCHESTRAL INSTRUMENTAL COMPOSERS in the stylistic wheelhouse of Hans Zimmer, are needed by the OWNER of a Film and TV Music Company that specializes in Cinema/Themes/Trailers. He's looking for composers that can create competitive Orchestral compositions that rival the great Hans Zimmer, without being a direct sound-a-like or copy. The owner of this company has an HIGH BAR, so be sure you're a SERIOUS and PROFESSIONAL composer who has the ability to turn around TOP-QUALITY compositions in a timely manner. Quoting the company's owner: "We need writers that can produce an average of two pieces a month over a 12 month period. I need big, theatrical instrumentals that have plenty of build." NO vocals -- Instrumentals ONLY. ALL tempos are welcome. As always, please do not rip off the referenced composer in any way, shape or form. Use him only as a guide for overall vibe. You must own or control 100% of the composition and master recording to pitch for this listing. All submissions need to be Broadcast Quality (excellent home recordings are fine). The listing party has asked us that members submit THREE instrumentals per submission so they can get a good idea of your range and ability. All submissions will be screened and critiqued by TAXI and must be received no later than Tuesday, March 19, 2013. TAXI #S130319IN

Here is my track let me now what you thinks and some advice thanks .

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[pboss]

Hi, It sounds pretty darned good to me. Consider this a broad-stroke opinion. Hopefully you can get a few fine-tooth-comb type opinions. Prod values seem really good.