Original Holiday Song

[jessevargasmusic]

LISTING: TAXI # S250922GN

My writing partner and I wrote this holiday pop song to have in our pockets for all these Holiday listings.
We were trying to create something that might be recorded by someone like Sabrina Carpenter or Ariana Grande (type-wise). This song is just a DEMO, so I'm generally looking for feedback on the songwriting, lyric structure, and overall feel & style. I certainly plan to re-do vocals and beef up the arrangement and production.

https://s.disco.ac/xqekoangfhfp

[RandallBuffam]

Jesse,
Love your Longer than a Kiss song. has a great feel. You are really close. The only space that feels like it needs to be filled by extra vocals somehow is in the bridge between the two "come on Santa"s. Did you produce this yourself? great vocals.