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Picture This

Post by littlestfly » Thu Sep 11, 2008 4:43 am

last one today i promise then ill start to do critiques.....craigCan you picture this? ©2008 Craig Little [Verse 1]There’s a picture that I holdBut it don’t hang from a wallAnd it’s not sitting thereOn a nightstand by a bedIt’s of you in my carYou tell me you love meAfter hearing those wordsI heard nothing else said
And though our photo albums fullThere are pictures that we missedSo I pray you hear me when I askCan you picture this?             [Chorus]You and I walking hand and handSaying I do and exchange wedding bandsIn front of God, bridal chorus playingFamily and friends, bells are ringingOur love sealed with an eternal kissTell me please tell me can you picture this?            [Verse 2]I have a picture of youThough many years have passedIt has never fadedI’ll keep forever in my mindOn our way to the churchIn your wedding dress you looked so lovelyWhen a man with a few too manyTook a one way trip across the line            [Verse 3]I have a picture of youLiving life to the fullestEverything you’ve been throughAll the tears and the smilesThough you’ve had your chancesYou never got marriedYou must have been waitingFor me all the while           [Pre chorus]And though our photo albums fullThere are pictures that we’ve missedSo as I look down from heavenI know you can picture this       [chorus]You and I walking hand and handSaying I do and exchange wedding bandsIn front of God, angels singingFamily and friends, bells are ringingLiving our life in eternal blissTell me please tell me, can you picture this?

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Re: Picture This

Post by linziellen » Thu Sep 18, 2008 1:56 pm

This is beautiful, I've just sat and read a few of your lyrics, I'm sorry I haven't before. You have an eye for detail and a wonderful way with words. I saw you mentioned cliches in another song, but I love where you're going, such simple honesty. It' s actually very sweet to read. And now I read again, I see the heart wrenching bricks you used to build this, I'm speechless.(Just my opinion)

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Re: Picture This

Post by littlestfly » Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:50 pm

linziellen,thanks for all the kind words. just things i have done through the years. and without being able to play any musical instruments im stuck. but as long as i can share them with people and it touches them that is all that matters. thank you very much and have a great night.....craig

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Re: Picture This

Post by littlestfly » Thu Sep 18, 2008 3:53 pm

linzielle, by the way u are in france? ill be there at the end of the month for the first time. im so excited.....talk to u later.....craig

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