Please criticize my music

[dixon]

I need all of your professional help. Need to polish up my act/songs. Please let me have it!http://www.myspace.com/dixonstreethttp: ... ists/dixon

[geo]

Hey Dixon, Geo here, had a quick listen to a couple of songs, right off tempos seem to drag a bit. I like the guitar riff on the first song on your myspace page. I would suggest two things:First pick a song you want to re-record, one that gets positive feedback from a cross-section of fans, a song you think has commercial potential and post that song and lyric and ask for feedback. You will find the advice will be more specific and helpful, and second;Have a pook around and listen to other people's stuff and offer feedback to them and welcome aboard... Geo

[hummingbird]

Quote:I need all of your professional help. Need to polish up my act/songs. Please let me have it!http://www.myspace.com/dixonstreethttp: ... ts/dixonHi Dixon - welcome aboard! What's your goal? Are you pitching yourself as an artist, are you pitching songs to artists, are you pitching for film/tv - we need to know so we can listen to your music within that context. (It's nice if you can you pick one song for us to critique at a time, & post the lyrics as well.)