Please critique! Nueviejo
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Re: Please critique! Nueviejo
Dec 17, 2008, 1:46am, deantaylor wrote:Pat,I like this piece a lot. Definately latin, not world, but who cares .. it is good. I also noticed that the playing is a bit stiff in spots. Make that better and you've really got something.DeanThanks Dean!Yes, one of the issues I was having in a long, essentially all soloing piece was getting lost in a bunch of different motifs... that, and trying to just record through the entire thing in one shot... I'm planning on a new session already to plot it out and use my head before just going for it. But you have to start somewhere!
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Re: Please critique! Nueviejo
hi zoomster,just listened and wrote down "just a bit fuller/sonic sound in the opening and solo guitars throughout" but that would be my preference, as it does blend nicely as is. then i read similar thoughts above, but better said, as usual...anyway, i like it allot, and is the title (my spanish 1-2 class didn't take me far in high school...) new/old, young/old? just curious.nice job, oh, and on your site there's a very promising other tune i also listened to in one of it's drafts--still holds up...all the best,warren
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Dec 17, 2008, 8:58am, heinsite wrote:hi zoomster,just listened and wrote down "just a bit fuller/sonic sound in the opening and solo guitars throughout" but that would be my preference, as it does blend nicely as is. then i read similar thoughts above, but better said, as usual...anyway, i like it allot, and is the title (my spanish 1-2 class didn't take me far in high school...) new/old, young/old? just curious.nice job, oh, and on your site there's a very promising other tune i also listened to in one of it's drafts--still holds up...all the best,warren Thanks for your thoughts Warren!Nueviejo means new/old.... though really it's jamming the two words together... and at the time it made sense to me, as this song takes some more traditional elements and pushes it into the 21st century -- drums, drones and bass all help with that.... though from seeing Serge's post above, I may have to go with Nueviaje, which would be roughly translated as new travel/trip... maybe it's a little more descriptive, but hell... it's not even officially on the market yet!And.... I'll be in touch with you about that lurking draft.... hopefully very soon!
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