Please give me feedback on an hybrid trailer track (S250105HA)

[MCPTigerBeats]

Hey there!
I could really need an oppinion about my hybrid action trailer track. Especially if act 3 is epic enough or if there's something missing:

https://www.taxi.com/members/CQr67DqaRh ... rtal-force

It's been written for listing S250105HA:
Lots of ORCHESTRAL/HYBRID TRAILER-Style INSTRUMENTALS are needed by a BRAND NEW Music Licensing Company, led by a CEO with a strong track record of working with Major Clients and landing some very notable placements. They are currently looking to build up their catalog, and this is a great opportunity to get in on the ground floor with a Company that is poised to make waves in the industry!

This company is on the lookout for a bunch of Instrumentals in the general stylistic ballpark of the following references:

"Undercover" by Really Slow Motion

"S.A.B.E.R. Squad" by InfraSound Music

"Lone Wolf" by Digital Blizzard

Quoting the CEO: "3-Act Structures are required."

Please submit well-composed Orchestral/Hybrid Trailer-style Instrumentals with an exciting, cinematic sound, lots of epic intensity, and a masterful blend of Orchestral and electronic elements! Your submissions should have dramatic, awe-inspiring motifs, and three "acts" that build to a climactic crescendo. Please craft your pieces around one central motif and create dynamics, interest, and tons of exciting, forward development by layering instrumentation in and out as the pieces progress to a huge, climactic ending. Instrumentation should be a blend of cinematic Orchestral instruments and things like synthetic pulses, powerful sound design, synth bass, atmospheric fx, etc. Please make sure that any virtual instruments or samples you use are high-quality and modern. If they are organic based, they need to be very realistic-sounding and well-articulated.

Submissions should be about 2 to 2.5 minutes long, give or take. Non-faded, buttoned/stinger endings will work best. Please do NOT copy the referenced examples in any way, shape, or form. Use them only as a general guide for tempo, texture, tone, and overall vibe. Do NOT submit any material with unauthorized samples of any other artists’ music, sounds, or any other form of media. Broadcast Quality is needed.


All feedback is welcome!

Thanks,
Timo

[JimOfferman]

Hey Timo!

I like your track a lot. Great work! Very moody and the double climax at the end works much better than the (single) climax of my track. While the track works as is, I do wonder if you need add more grit to fit better with what is requested in this listing.

Cheers,
Jim.

[MCPTigerBeats]

Thanks a lot Jim! I know what you mean, i think i'll try adding some distorted synths or something to make it sound more gritty. Great advice