Please Let Me know if This Still Needs Work

[Stubee]

https://www.taxi.com/members/V2G7ZzSiTs ... cky-breeze

I don't have a listing for this right now but I have reworked this several times. I got some feedback from a custom review on TAXI.
I would like to know if I am getting closer to the quality needed to get forwarded.

Thank you,
Stu

[DouglasKnight]

Hi Stu - I would start fresh on this one. It's not a bad composition, and you have lots of variation on the lead instrument, but I'm hearing lots of issues with timing and tuning. Also, you could use more dynamics and a pause/edit point. I'd recommend practicing the piece until everything is played much more in time, and then be sure to really tune each instrument before recording. Hope this helps, and good luck with it.

[Stubee]

Thank you for the feed back, Douglas. The weird thing is that the timing sounds good in g Logic on each instrument but when a I
a metronome agains the wav file, I hear the timing problem. Thank you.

-Stu