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Re: everyone write this song

Post by hummingbird » Sun Apr 20, 2008 1:27 pm

I dislike four line versesthat rhyme ev'ry second timeI dislike eating hot dogsthey spill mustard on my frillsI do like eating choc'latebig bits, little, all of it.
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Post by stevendavis » Sun Apr 20, 2008 3:09 pm

Now Lindsey's gone and made this altruistic BTW...who's doing the musicCoz I got a chord or 2 that really really ringsAnd I vote Logan (audiorayne) this song to singThat guy's voice can make this goldAnd maybe some bigwig will put in ON HOLD (ok, I did my part )

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Post by jchitty » Sun Apr 20, 2008 3:11 pm

Apr 20, 2008, 6:09pm, stevendavis wrote:Now Lindsey's gone and made this altruistic BTW...who's doing the musicCoz I got a chord or 2 that really really ringsAnd I vote Logan (audiorayne) this song to singThat guy's voice can make this goldAnd maybe some bigwig will put in ON HOLD (ok, I did my part )Hey, I like DAT.

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Post by milfus » Sun Apr 20, 2008 3:21 pm

and we'll all go gold and still have rentcause you cant cash a fiftieth of a centbut we'll smile just the same to have the bill board name uslost a wild little game and still scored famousas we connect the dots to the perfect song as we connect the dots to the perfect songits the chorus, figured id help if we are gonna get famous or somethin
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Post by stevendavis » Sun Apr 20, 2008 3:53 pm

Apr 20, 2008, 6:11pm, jchitty wrote:Apr 20, 2008, 6:09pm, stevendavis wrote:Now Lindsey's gone and made this altruistic BTW...who's doing the musicCoz I got a chord or 2 that really really ringsAnd I vote Logan (audiorayne) this song to singThat guy's voice can make this goldAnd maybe some bigwig will put in ON HOLD (ok, I did my part )Hey, I like DAT. Thanks Buddy If we need a woman's version, I say SquidsThat Gals pipes can turn us all to liquidsIf this is getting old, man I can dig itSo if you want it dead, My vocals will surely frigg it

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Post by davekershaw » Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:50 am

Tryin' a come up with an endin'but time I could be better spendin'maybe take my watch for mendin'but I'll have to do some lendin'and my plants they need attendin''fore they droop and start upendin'so I hope I'm not offendin'if I stop an' leave it pendin'

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by stevendavis » Mon Apr 21, 2008 1:38 am

Apr 21, 2008, 3:50am, davekershaw wrote:Tryin' a come up with an endin'but time I could be better spendin'maybe take my watch for mendin'but I'll have to do some lendin'and my plants they need attendin''fore they droop and start upendin'so I hope I'm not offendin'if I stop an' leave it pendin' Good one Dave Amen....dinAs Dave begs to bring this to a closeHere's a couple things yous should knowsWhat this song is missing, is some Dave Walton witA man who has in the past cracked us up a bitAnd when the mix is final we'll ask a critique from MattoWho's vast wisdom might say.......Let's seeMusic 1Lyrics 1Marketability.......Ah hellYou guys save the $5 sub fee and go play the Lotto

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by jchitty » Mon Apr 21, 2008 2:38 am

Apr 20, 2008, 6:53pm, stevendavis wrote:Apr 20, 2008, 6:11pm, jchitty wrote:Hey, I like DAT. Thanks Buddy If we need a woman's version, I say SquidsThat Gals pipes can turn us all to liquidsIf this is getting old, man I can dig itSo if you want it dead, My vocals will surely frigg it This is your cue, Squiddy.

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by squids » Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:32 am

That was a CUE? OMG!! Do you guys still like me? Am I okay with all y'all? Heh.Okay:I'd love to sing this gorgeous songSadly it goes on too longI'd need O2 at least as strongAs lungs you'd need to do a ..............Heh.

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by byllsong » Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:38 am

Slowly and surelyThough we've done our bestI think this song maybeIs on it's last breath
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