everyone write this song

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by rlcmusic » Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:46 am

Apr 21, 2008, 9:38am, byllsong wrote: Slowly and surelyThough we've done our bestI think this song maybeIs on it's last breath Don’t try and put this tune to bed,It doesn't like pyjamasIf this song dies, blame solely lies,With 'Billy Boy Bahamas'Errrrr......do you really spell it Pajamas over there??!! "colorful pajamas" I'm learning a new language.

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by davekershaw » Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:03 am

Quote:Don’t try and put this tune to bed,It doesn't like pyjamasIf this song dies, blame solely lies,With 'Billy Boy Bahamas'It Lives!

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Post by byllsong » Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:06 am

Bajamas O, Lord here we goTrying to raise to deadDoing the very best we canIt could be us instead
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Re: everyone write this song

Post by devin » Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:04 am

To live? To die? To just hold on?The ending is hard to figurePerhaps M Laskow will review our songAnd finally pull the trigger
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Post by stevendavis » Tue Apr 22, 2008 7:44 am

If ML won't, someone please doCoz this thing is starting to reek like pooIt may need a ride with Dr. KevorkianOver a cliff in a big silver DeLorean(flux this thing with a capacitor)

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by linziellen » Tue Apr 22, 2008 9:55 am

So let me get this straightYou guys have had enoughWell what a bloody shameI thought we'd got it nailedAnd to think I put my moneyOn getting some kind of dealWell bugger me if I don't cryWhile wishing this baby goodbye

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by ibanez468 » Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:36 am

I thought you guys were havin' funThere's noway that this thing is doneBut if you're ready ta' call it quitsThen let's get on with the TAXI blitz

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Re: everyone write this song

Post by byllsong » Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:46 am

This thing has more livesThan a re-incarnating catNo matter what we try to do It just keeps coming back
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Re: everyone write this song

Post by byllsong » Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:53 am

The words and ideas in this here threadDoth do lots of good things for usIt's good exercise...thats for sureGood practice for verses and chorus
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Re: everyone write this song

Post by squids » Tue Apr 22, 2008 6:08 pm

Yeah but where's the lift, I'm asking youIs it all verse and chorus?We get rejected, ya know we doIf it's boring and sonorous (don't get me started, I had to look it up)

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