New Vocal tune -- working tape

[mcanty]

I know you didn't ask for production comments. But..............the guitar tone is incredible (the electric). The vocals are very current and spot on other than one "gonna spend a lot more time with me" line towards the end - sounded rushed. The song is very sweet and catchy. Is the vocal panned to the left? This is exactly the type of song I hear on Sirius Coffeehouse channel. My wife would eat this alive.I am very impressed.The only thing I did not like was the shaker. Great great potential in my opinion.

[mcanty]

Honestly - I read your "to do" list up top..............and I would advise you to go with a less is more approach..........I don't know that I would add more keys and more guitars.............It may sound sparse to ears like mine and yours (used to hearing bombastic productions at least as far as I go) but the sparse sound that you've captured is very current.It's your song but I'd advise against filling it up with unnecessary instrumentation.