Taxi forum improved version...

[eokamura]

Here's a tune i had up a couple of weeks ago. Got some great feedback, critiques, suggestions and hopefully improved it. Thanks guys for the input. I think it could work for a singer/songwriter kind of Iron and Wine, Elliott Smith type of vibe. I even did my best to throw in some emmerdales... eo.www.taxi.com/eoGreat whites and Tigers and Bulls I wish you all the luck in the worlda fleeting glimpse at a fickle girlshe'll tear you up and make you whole againyour heart will explode and your head will spinChorus: swimming with great whites and tigers and bullsa grizzly bear nibbles at your toesbirds of prey out on patrol your swimming with great whites and tigers and bullsit's so dangerous you could lose a legif you don't get bit you might drown insteadCHORUS/ OUTRO

[k o star]

hey Ethan... I felt 2 emmerdallic moments at 1:23 & 3:00... they both came right after a nice momentary pause...I told U b4 I think this track is beautiful... and now it's even more so...-Kel

[eokamura]

Thanks Demon. On my way to check out one of your tunes right now. eo.

[k o star]

Cool Ethan... I've downloaded this song & placed it in my Taxi members fav music folder for my listening pleasure...The more I hear it, the more it grows in me... seriously.-Kps. hmmm, can't seem to open the downloaded file though =(