her nightmare in limbo

[silvercord]

hi friends, long time no C...i have been building my new system\the last week or so~ but it looks like my new rig is up and running(yay)i hope you don't mind me sharing this little ditty: her nightmare in limboat: www.taxi.com/silvercord( Sorry for the indirect link...for some reason the "&stream=true" doesn't want to work )would love to hear what you think!wishing you a great daygeoff

[ideascapes]

Hey geoff,I'm jealous you have a new system--mine is starting to wheeze...Nice sound here--this is your specialty, right? Atmospheric/trance music, some instrumental, some with lyric?Everything sounded appropriate to me, except for the snare. I know that's personal choice, but I'd look for another sound were it my song. Some of the other sounds were really cool, especially as they became exposed at the very end. You might consider adding more vocal breaks so we can hear the movement of the instruments throughout the song a bit.You didn't post lyrics, so I assumed you weren't looking for comments there.Vince

[k o star]

hey Geoff... is this U singing? Cool vocals man...I love the atmosphere here...I especially like the "memories" part whereby a bell tings...Lyrics would be cool if posted =)-Kel

[silvercord]

thanks gents!! Vince..you know what, i think im really bad at choosing snareshonestly...allot of the taxi screeners say my snare choices couldbe better..time to listen to good advice!yes, Kel..thats me singin~ im glad you dug!here be the lyrics (sorry i forgot about them)!!Verse 1 -She lay in wait under the lamp light As shadows fall from haunted bleak eyes She’s long since slipped from any real From when the severed cord would not heal Chorus -Waking up…. To nothing at all Roaming halls…. That lead to nowhere Crying out To be heard by no one Verse 2 -She tries to glimpse the memories That evaporate before they’re seen There are the clues that scream the truth But in her darkness they elude (Chorus)Bridge -Whatever is this place you abide In which the answers seem to all hide And here you remain (Chorus )