Slow Down - new song

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Re: Slow Down - new song

Post by yammer107 » Mon Apr 27, 2009 1:31 pm

Thanks for the comments Andy & Paul.... it definately needs some harmonies & tweakin'..... But some input before going further keeps me from getting too caught up in myself. Hey Andy I see your from my neck of the woods! (Ohio) Chris

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Re: Slow Down - new song

Post by shawncullen » Tue Apr 28, 2009 6:37 am

Just listening now...Nice and friendly song, if you get what I mean. Like the swing. Very approachable and radio friendly. MOR? Pleasant enough. Perhaps an album track rather than a single?I agree about Michael Buble!!Good workShawn
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Re: Slow Down - new song

Post by yammer107 » Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:42 am

Hmm..... 2nd Micheal Buble comment..... Guess I'll haft to Youtube him this evening as I've never heard of the guy... Thanks for on going comments... perhaps I'll post an update but for moment my heads in another song ( have muse will travel ) Chris

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Re: Slow Down - new song

Post by derekmcfarland » Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:04 pm

I do agree with the "dated sound" comments. I think it is CLOSE to broadcast quality.Drier, more up-front vocal would help. Some of the dating comes from the phrasing in the performance (particularly the word "dwelling." I was hearing some Weird Al in that one).I would avoid the reference to "GPS" as it is trendy and will limit the timeliness of the song.For the style, I think it is very good. Maybe more opportunity for film/versus song pitches?Thanks for sharing, hope this helps.Derek

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