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Wake Up Roman Charges

Post by wignelson » Fri Apr 03, 2009 8:37 am

From the musical A Feeling of Power by Wig Nelson AKA L. E. Nelson Jr.http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplaye ... 86142&q=hi

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Post by carlosgomez » Fri Apr 03, 2009 2:45 pm

Don't know who or what Roman Charges.... related to roman candles? heheYou say that this is a piece from a musical that you are-have writing-written?

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Post by ideascapes » Fri Apr 03, 2009 3:40 pm

Wig,What did you want feedback on here? It has a sort of renaissance sound to it. Lacks a bottom of course, with no bass or drums. Since you have violins going, why not put a double bass in there to fill it out a little more? The vocal works well.Vince

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Post by partyofone » Fri Apr 03, 2009 7:01 pm

Hi Wig.. yeah I dig the vocal on this as Vince stated. Cool little arrangement.. I think as Vince said if it was filled out a bit more it would add a lot. Not familiar with the musical but I like the song. Nice!

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Post by k o star » Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:17 am

Very Interesting song... needs some low end though... maybe a Cello would be cool yea! Good track Wig!-Kel
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Re: Wake Up Roman Charges

Post by wignelson » Sat Apr 04, 2009 2:24 am

Apr 3, 2009, 5:45pm, carlosgomez wrote:Don't know who or what Roman Charges.... related to roman candles? heheYou say that this is a piece from a musical that you are-have writing-written? Yes, Carlos,It's a musical with 17 songs. Roman Charges is a guy who is too plugged in for his own good. (laptop-cell phone-beeper-headset with goggles) He can't unplug because he is afraid of missing something. Therefore, he misses his life.

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Post by wignelson » Sat Apr 04, 2009 2:28 am

Apr 3, 2009, 6:40pm, ideascapes wrote:Wig,What did you want feedback on here? It has a sort of renaissance sound to it. Lacks a bottom of course, with no bass or drums. Since you have violins going, why not put a double bass in there to fill it out a little more? The vocal works well.VinceGlad you like the vocals, Vince. Yeah, the piece is a little top heavy. I do have a bass in there, but it's not hot enough at this point. I might try to add some pizzicato bass for a sharper attack.There's a lot going on there: Two nylon string guitars, one with effects, one steel string guitar with heavy delay, arco strings, agitato strings and low attack bass.

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Re: Wake Up Roman Charges

Post by wignelson » Sat Apr 04, 2009 2:31 am

Apr 3, 2009, 10:01pm, partyofone wrote:Hi Wig.. yeah I dig the vocal on this as Vince stated. Cool little arrangement.. I think as Vince said if it was filled out a bit more it would add a lot. Not familiar with the musical but I like the song. Nice!Glad you like the song, Patrick,I might try to fill it in a little more, perhaps with some hand percussion and some kind of bottom as Vince said. The musical is about Roman Charges, a sad case of someone who is too plugged in. Notice his name appears on your cell phone bill.

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Re: Wake Up Roman Charges

Post by wignelson » Sat Apr 04, 2009 2:31 am

Apr 4, 2009, 3:17am, reasondemon wrote:Very Interesting song... needs some low end though... maybe a Cello would be cool yea! Good track Wig!-KelThanks, Kel,I'll work on some low end and repost.Wig

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