"The Darkness" (Alt-Rock, Pop)

[k o star]

hey Jeff... I like Ur attitude man... it'll take U far...I had another listen & also checked out Ur other songs on Ur myspace & Ur site and I feel I really need to say this...Ok, firstly... Ur songs are really super Awesome! U have Fantastic kick ass melodies... and these have potential to be BIG hits!!!IMHO...However... I can't not take notice Ur diction of certain words, and it's a little too obvious to let pass... there could be a little problem there...You have a good vocal range and the music is Gr8 so it would be a waste not to fix the pronunciation problem.I'm sorry I cannot not mention this cos Ur songs are really Fantastic!!!I can really picture them as huge radio hits!Pls don't take offense this is my honest opinion & I could be wrong but just what I feel...Sincerely,-K

[heckxx]

Thanks K...yeah, I am starting to work again on my speech (haven't thought about this stuff since I actually had speech "classes" in high school), and now I'm starting to hear and feel my speech and pronouncing mistakes, which is good. So hopefully when I re-record all of this, the diction will be much better!-Jeff

[k o star]

Respect Ur persistence Jeff... All the BEST!!!Keep those awesome melodies coming!-K