My Lobotomy Baby

[wignelson]

Is there a listing for this one?Or is some art just destined to be part of posterity? http://www.songramp.com/mod/mps/viewtra ... ckid=71267

[ideascapes]

Wig,This rivals "Butthole Surfers" as the most un-PC title or band name! Some really good production elements in there and the vocal sort of floats above the band.Listing? Retro songs about brains in a jar?V>

[wignelson]

Mar 24, 2009, 7:40pm, ideascapes wrote:Wig,This rivals "Butthole Surfers" as the most un-PC title or band name! Some really good production elements in there and the vocal sort of floats above the band.Listing? Retro songs about brains in a jar?V>Thanks for responding, Vince,Counting you, that's at least one person. Un-PC? I rather thought that was the point. This is just a first draft thrown together in a couple of hours. Yes, it's a silly song. If you're not careful, you can edit yourself right out of existence. You'll have to forgive the attempt at jocularity. Have you heard my song called, "I've Got A Bag For Your Head?" You might find that one un-PC as well. The guitar player likes it and will lay down all new tracks soon with a better sound. Then there will be harmony and a new bass track and so on.I think I'll keep the vocal treatment as is. Maybe floating above the band is the right place for an un-PC song.Wig

[dada]

Hey wig,great lyrics and concept.. your arrangement does have some good production values.. I would like to hear a more straight forward drum beat or maybe change it up a little between what you have and something a tad simpler.. Musically, the lyrics need something a little more edgy and new sounding to really make this shine.. not sure the piano needs to be there at all.. I guess I am trying to say "punkier"..Anyhow, just my two cents..Dave

[k o star]

It's a good track... though I wanted to hear lots of crazy drums crashes at the Chorus!!! Rev it up yea!!! more distorted guitars & madness needed at the Choruses!! More!!! and perhaps screaming the same line further in the background...-K