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Re: Whew!

Post by sgs4u » Sun Apr 20, 2008 6:49 pm

Now, I'm just gonna add one thing here. I love all of you for listening and/or posting on this thread. But could someone give me a little info on how to make this tune a slam dunk?

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Re: Whew!

Post by ontariolightning » Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:47 pm

cool steve thats a big accomplishment, congratulations

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Re: Whew!

Post by andreh » Sun Apr 20, 2008 9:08 pm

Steve-Awesome track, man...really dig it. Great production, great performances, totally unique and memorable - not surprising at all that it was forwarded.If you're looking for thoughts to make it even better, here are mine:- If you're seeking success as a novelty song in the sports "arena," don't change a thing...it'll find a home for sure (assuming you're doing what you can to get it heard by the right people).- If you're hoping to land this listing's particular placement (or one similar to it in the future), you might think about making the arrangement more mainstream/indie rock, and replace the [excellent] singer with someone who has more of an Eddie Vedder/Kurt Cobain/sexy/moany/alt rock voice, and less of a "midwestern-American sports fan" [or equivalent Canadian species] sound. I notice the listing calls for something that might be heard on today's radio, and I can't imagine a station or an artist that would get away with this sound. As cool as it is, it's just too off the path for any situtation outside of a novelty.Super job, in any case!André
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Re: Whew!

Post by cyndy » Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:19 am

Steve,Just re-listened to "We Win" after your post asking if anything should be changed to make this a "slam-dunk."IMHO - the only thing that struck me that might need changed was the "speed" of the song. If it was speeded up the slightest bit... I mean just the tiniest bit... the flow would change exponentially for me.As for the "mid-Western fan" voice, well....you're not gonna get any complaint from me on that one! LOLAND ... I haven't been around here long enough to notice your "inciteful" side... so for now, we'll leave it as "insightful."

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