I have remixed my song Break Apart - Feedback?

[annathomas]

I am a 13 year old singer songwriter and have remixed my song "Break Apart". You can find it at this link including the lyrics. I would love any additional feedback as I used what some had suggested on this new mix. Thank you!http://www.broadjam.com/artists/songs.ph....sion INDEX=2979

[jwebbinspired]

Anna, Great mix!! Your production is really good from my perspective. Hopefully someone else will chime in on production. I like the harmony guitar (maybe it's a bass?) on your right. The only thing I can hear to improve it is to add a little more production to the chorus to make it stand out a little more. The melody seems to be the only thing that changes between the lift and the chorus. Maybe add fuller keyboards or something during the chorus? I love the groove. I'm digging it.Andy

[lindpop]

I really like the song, but I think you can increase the vocalpart a few db. A tip I don´t know if you know is Lower the overall volume so you hardly can´t hear anything. Listen to the vocal. you should still hear every word clear. This is just my opinion.Kind regards

[marcblack30]

hard to believe you're only 13!i'm totally diggin' this tune, very groovy, current, kind of a fiona apple vibe to it.i would like to hear the vox a little louder in the mix, i like andy's sugg to add more production to the chorus to make it really shine.overall, great job!marc

[orest]

Wow! Really nice and groovy tune! If you make songs this good at your age, there is no telling how far you can take your music in the future! I would love to hear the vocal more in front so we can hear these lovely words even more! I think if you pan the organ right and left it would be even more fuller in the sound image. The production is very clear and I think it's broadcast quality, maybe as the others are saying, make the chorus a bit stronger. NICE WORK!

[annathomas]

GREAT FEEDBACK. We are going to have a chance to tweak further this month...I also have an arrangement that is piano driven in a half time swing - same tempo...Great ideas and feedback...thanks to you all!