"Heartless" - Ready for production?

[jwebbinspired]

Patrick, I'm digging this. Production will be the make or break (which is so much the case theses days) but I think you have a great core song. The melody especially in the chorus is catchy and quite memorable. I like the "do do do down" or whatever it is, it's cathy and rythmic leaving a very memorable character. I agree that the lyrics aren't exactly the next "Imagine" but this genre let's you have some leeway. I'd say it's ready!Andy

[k o star]

hahahah! very catchy indeed... my fav part is "du du dow du du now pow wow" heheh! man... I can't wait to hear d end product...-Kel

[partyofone]

andy, thanks... yeah no real depth here ha ha.. I'm a sucker for a great melody and a cool little phrase though. kel, thanks.. I'll post the demo once I finish it.