Thoughts on the lyric and song?

[partyofone]

Nice crisp production and mix. I'll second mojo's advice on first person. And in my opinion chorus could be bigger with addition of more vocal harmonies. Good luck and nice work.

[southpaw]

Thanks for the input Mojo and Patrick!I agree, the horns do still sound a little over-bearing, ill probly bring 'em back some more and cut out some of the jarring high end freqs.I hadnt thought about singing it in the first person.. Im not sure if i feel right doing it... I wonder if it would be misconstrued by the listener, or offensive to anyone who didnt know i was 'representing' the 'character' who im honoring...? Appreciate your time and comments, thanks again!