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[jay10music]

HEY GUY'S... PLEASE CHOOSE THE BETTER TRACK...Track one is lower volumeTrack two lowder re-mixNeed 2 Submit today....jay... http://www.taximusic.com/download/21056 ... 0.mp3Thank U 4 Taken the time....Jay...

[rld]

I think the volumes fine...good track.The solo cello moves around in the stereo field a bit too much for my taste...but I don't know if it matters or not.

[kurtkreimier]

Jay,I like this. I think the 2nd one is better. It does not have the cello moving around in the stereo field mentioned by RLD. What listing is this for?Kurt

[jay10music]

THANKS RLD AND KURT 4 the listen...I like the 2nd.. 1... 2...The listing is 4 Emotional Drama....jay..

[tlbennett]

Hi Jay, Very nice !!! I found myself singing a vocal melody to this and , in my own head, hearing a great powerful chorus kick in. I am not trying to critique this because I am a more into the vocal songs. I will say that I enjoyed listening to that very much. Great Job!

[jay10music]

Thanks Tony....Maybe A Vocal.....It could work....jay...

[feaker]

beep beepYa know this isn't my thing friend. Totally useless here.I like the second the best. Tried picturing myself playing my guitar with that timing. Very tricky my friend.This is the first time I didn't get some kind of visual while listening????Fingers crossed for you.Paul

[aldicicco]

Hi Jay,When I listened to the first version, I thought that you really needed to consider other voicing for the cello and guitar.This doesn't seem to be the case however. In your re-mix those voices sound much better placed and complementary.Obviously the re-mix is the stronger version. The big difference for me is that the second version has a greater presence of the passing chords played in the background. Version 2 had more depth in this regard, whereas V1 seemed to just hang on a chord.Good luck with this song.Al

[cameron]

Guess I was too late for your deadline, but I agree that the remix is better.Cam

[ideascapes]

Jay,Sorry I didn't get to this in time, but I did give #2 a listen. Guitar and piano sounds are a bit thin. Guitar break was cool and unexpected.Hope you get a forward.VinceP.S. Congrats on hitting the 1,000 post mark on the forum!