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Re-sing, any better?

Post by heinsite » Tue Jan 27, 2009 5:55 pm

hi guys and gals,had this resung to try to make it more "pop/rock/today"only good comments welcome--LOL--fat chance...it's the car commercial--but the vocal version again....thanks, oh, ps, will have a new tune ready in a day or two of one you guys thought had some promise, marty is finishing the mix, and a totally new one in about a week....all the best,warrenhttp://www.taximusic.com/download/196078/Let_s ... e.mp3Let's DriveVerse 1Only so much sun todayJump on in let's drive awayYou know there's not much out there freeI stare into your eyesThey steal blue from the skyWithout your touch I'm lost, I'm lostChorusRoads we travel might be gravelDon't forget it's you and ISometimes our best plans unravelBut we still get byYeah let's take that driveLet's driveVerse 2Take a drive with meGotta feel this warm eveningRoll your window down and we'll fly, we'll flyNo fear let's feel the blissWe can sneak a real kissAnd I know you'll let me try--I'll tryChorus x2Outro VerseTake a drive with meGotta feel this warm eveningRoll your window down...

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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by kitz » Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:21 pm

Wow!!Warren this ROCKSSSSSS!!!Great job!!!Mix smokes!!Wow!! That's all I can say - WOW!!Kitz

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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by Casey H » Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:28 pm

Sounds great, Warren!!! I'm on laptop speakers but it sounds teriffic all around... Who is on the vocal? The voice reminds me of someone but I can't place it. What car commercial are you referring to? Is there a specific opp you are targeting?Great stuff!!! Casey

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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by heinsite » Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:52 pm

thanks guys!too kind kitz!! thanks too casey, the "car commercial" LOL.... was the instrumental version that was up for a week or so...it's still down there...somewhere...oh, the singer is just "Phil", the studio doesn't like giving out full names--and i picked him just because he did sound very familiar...all the best, thanks again my friends...warren

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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by teleblaster » Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:57 pm

Killer track Warren. I'm partial to hillbilly music these days, but I gotta say... WOW. Great writing and great production. I predict forwards and deals on this one.Erich

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Post by wta » Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:09 pm

Nailed...
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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by cameron » Tue Jan 27, 2009 10:21 pm

Warren... buddy. This is AWESOME!!!! You nailed it alright. And best of all, it would still make a great car commercial!! That's probably where the money is, after all. Man, this sounds like your breakthrough to me. GREAT WORK!!!!! Camster

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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by feaker » Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:48 am

WarrenI highly agree with all the troops above.This is my kinda music. Peppy, great lyrics, great production, excellent guitar and leads, and perfectly matched vox. What a package.I don't know what they call it, but I see this as an intro for a weekly TV show.I promise this will have a home or I will eat my shorts.Way to go man.Paul

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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by carlosgomez » Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:14 am

Good tune and production. The singer is very good. I don't know it reminds me of a cross between the Friends theme song and some other song I can't seem to place this morning but good job.

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Re: Re-sing, any better?

Post by jwebbinspired » Wed Jan 28, 2009 2:55 am

Way to go Warren! This is great! The melody reminds me of something Fastball would put out. Really, really catchy, definitely matches the genre. It just sounds great all around.Bravo.Andy

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