In Our Other Life - Enough of a chorus?

[feaker]

camYour songs just get to me.It is in part your voice and chord progressions, but the story is really great also.Love the piano part in the chorus.Well donePaul

[cameron]

Hey Paul,Thanks lots. You guys are way to kind to a guy who probably shouldn't even sing in the shower. I've been working on a rewrite, as it takes too long to get to the chorus, but I actually think the original is a bit better. I'll probably post the modified one up here in a day or two and let you guys decide.Cameron