Waiting Sure Is Tough...?

[jwebbinspired]

Hello all. I've been having writer's block since before the holidays. And I think Adrienne gave me some inspiration to pull out some old stuff I had been working on. This is a song I started almost a year ago exactly. I'm not looking for production feedback, I know it's terrible. But please any advice regarding melody, lyrics, terminology, tempo, whatever, I'd love to get feedback while this is still on the carpenter's table.I still have no idea how you guys stream off of Taxi. If anyone wants to explain that to me too, I'd appreciate it. Here is the link to my homepage http://www.taximusic.com/hosting/home.p ... 53“Waiting On a Ring”©2008 Andrew Scott WillsShe wrote her number,Right here on my hand,So I’d remember,To dial it in,That’s some signal,I think she might like me,More than a little,She’s waiting patiently by the phone,She’s waiting on a ring,Waiting on the moment that would change her life,Waiting on me,To prove whether I’m Mr. Right,I can’t stop thinking about her,I thank God,She’s waiting on a ring,I think she knows,Tonight’s the night,I’m going to propose,To change our lives,I see it in her eyes,I can see in her face,It’s no surprise,Why we’re in this place under the stars,Before the wedding,He pulled me aside,Said “she’s been waiting,”For this day all her life,“I’m happy to have you”And then he smiled,“Better get up there”“She’ll be coming down the isle soon”