Here I Stand - Wedding Song

[sgs4u]

Dec 16, 2008, 5:12am, billg wrote: (how the heck do you market a wedding song?)Anyway, I'm going to copy & paste your lyrics, remove your name and tell my wife that I wrote it for her. I've got a feeling that I'll get "lucky" so thanks in advance Make it the only song for sale, where there is heavy traffic at a wedding fair? A free gift bag giveaway when you sign up for "X." How about a flower shop using it to make brides extra happy. Sell a Kareoke machine with the song installed. version with it? On a wedding planner's website? Endless opportunities if one thinks outside the box. Thanks for listening Bill. Really, it works wonders on wives. Tell her you wrote it, I'm all for making wives happier. They have so much crap to put up with. hehe

[partyofone]

Dec 16, 2008, 5:12am, billg wrote:I think the lyrics are perfect. I'm not so sure that if this was marketed strictly as a wedding song you'd have to worry about having a stronger chorus etc. (how the heck do you market a wedding song?)Anyway, I'm going to copy & paste your lyrics, remove your name and tell my wife that I wrote it for her. I've got a feeling that I'll get "lucky" so thanks in advance lol

[sgs4u]

Dec 12, 2008, 11:04pm, heinsite wrote: slow the damn tune down, and don't crowd the lyrics man....--first thing i'm hearing is what i trust, and that is just the chorus'ssss, "your man" just is not "involved" enough, and doesn't linger enough, not just in meter/time, but in lyric......the "your man" just comes to fast and seems somewhat hurried....can he do that for one of my tunes someday???all the best,warrenslower, hmm - worth considering hang on that phrase a while - hmm and yes, I could play piano for you too

[sgs4u]

Dec 18, 2008, 12:54pm, ontariolightning wrote:Bit cheesy / music sounds a bit christmas morningish LOLBut he obviously is in love with her, he being youThis Is what music should be about, no critiques from me, I enjoyed thisIt's a brave thing to do to put your feelings before the world or at least a bunch of people to see/feelKudos man, btw canucks suck, go leafs go hahaYeah you're right man, it was cheesey, but then so am I!Leafs sorry, not this year again...http://www.straight.com/article-176197/ ... er-canucks

[jay10music]

Just a beautiful song... Great Vocal....Great Lyrics...great job..... Why is there no alcohol in your pic.. Love Ya! Man...Jay...

[sgs4u]

Dec 18, 2008, 5:14pm, taxi wrote: Just a beautiful song... Great Vocal....Great Lyrics...great job..... Why is there no alcohol in your pic.. Love Ya! Man...Jay... Thx J, you just don't see the alcohol. Look into my eyes, they're glazed.