Re: Request Critique Song "One Time For Love"

[pitterpatter]

Same comments. Your songs could be done in a raggae style and I think that they would be very nice done like that. Nice melody on this one. It still needs work to develop verses, if one time for love is your chorus.

[cameron]

I'd like to hear this one with instrumentation. I think it could make a good gospel song.I think I mentioned once before in another thread that you'd get more responses if you would just post your songs one at a time, i.e. no more than one per week or so. Cam