Takin Pictures Off The Wall

[mojobone]

My initial reaction was the same as Warren's. I think you maybe got a chorus, there, but I can't hear it for the clutter. It's a good and timely story, but you'll need to trim the fat. Maybe insert a line about the bank (getting more specific about why you're takin' those pictures down) in the first verse, so the line about "Grandma not trusting..."becomes more of a callback. While you're looking for places to cut, I'd suggest that rather long pre-chorus could use some attention. Good luck with this, it's got potential.