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stephen1977 · Post by **stephen1977** » Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:49 am

Nov 14, 2008, 7:47am, billg wrote:The only nit-pick I have is with the abrupt ending which doesn't sound natural IMO. Its a devilish trick! Its to make you go back and listen over and over! All the cool kids are doing it. It's really hot right now.

Casey H · Post by **Casey H** » Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:56 am

I played it at the mp3 link.I like it a lot. I always make sure I mention again that country is not my genre. What matters is not if it's a very good song, but if it's a great song. That's what will determine if it makes the country high bar. I think it's at least a very good song. (I'm being super-critical in anticipation of the bar.)At the rally, you got to see how Sherrill Blackman listened for killer hooks and other things that make a song stand out. The hook is simple and stays in your head. Big plus! I don't know whether more melodic lift at the chorus is needed but there is a rhythmic change-up at the chorus which does make it stand out some from the verse.All you can do now is submit it and see. It's definitely worth submitting... Good luck!! Casey

devin · Post by **devin** » Fri Nov 14, 2008 1:13 pm

................................................................................Hey gang! Sorry I'm late,................................................................................I had to work like a dog................................................................................today and this is the very................................................................................first time I've heard this all................................................................................together...sounds awesome................................................................................so far! ................................................................................I'll listen down in the studio................................................................................after the kids go to bed. But................................................................................I gotta say how much fun................................................................................this was. Great lyric Dean,................................................................................your tone and chops fit ................................................................................awesome Stephen, and Marc ................................................................................did an amazing job on ................................................................................pulling it all together with all................................................................................the other instruments and ................................................................................production duties.................................................................................I'll verify the mix on my good................................................................................speakers, but right now the................................................................................banjo sounds a bit loud, ................................................................................on the chords................................................................................played immediately after................................................................................chorus #1...but I'll check it.................................................................................I think I like being................................................................................panned to the right

matthoggard · Post by **matthoggard** » Fri Nov 14, 2008 1:43 pm

Great production!Nicely done guys. This song could be a radio song easy.My only gripe is I think the vocal delivery in the chorus could have some more emotion and feeling. The V/C seperation is nice the lift is good but the vocal delivery is a little to relaxed IMO.Thats it. If I dont hear this on the radio next year Im gonna start writin for Celine Deion!!!Devin, Banjo is mixed great to me. Listening on my uber hi-fi audiophile cabinets. Sounds awesome.And hey, better to be panned right than not being panned at all!! M~

devin · Post by **devin** » Fri Nov 14, 2008 4:54 pm

Thanks Aaron...are you thinking the lyric, music, or whole package needs more brewing? I'm really glad to see you stop by, please let us know.Nov 14, 2008, 3:43pm, matthoggard wrote:Thats it. If I dont hear this on the radio next year Im gonna start writin for Celine Deion!!!M~My good man, I'm bringing some Turkey over to your house for a three way chat if EITHER of these things happen!

wignelson · Post by **wignelson** » Sun Nov 16, 2008 9:37 am

Nov 14, 2008, 9:09am, billg wrote:Hey Marc, my damn computer is wiggin' out & doesn't want to play nice with Taxi so I can't listen to the new link. I'm sure the end is fine. Like I said, if they listen that far I think you're safe!I resemble that comment! Just kidding, I like the song no matter which ending you use, Marc

stephen1977 · Post by **stephen1977** » Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:08 pm

So Dean, Devin, Marc... ...where are we at on this? Last I heard was the new chorus......Man, just like a guitar player... ...never known nuttin'.

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