Critique it 'This Time'

djdale · Post by **djdale** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:54 pm

Thanks for all your praise! This really means much to me. If I can get the screener to coincide and give me a forward! Wah hoo!How long does it take for screeners to get to you submission?Dale

heinsite · Post by **heinsite** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:11 pm

well hello djdale!!--whoa, very nice job my new friend. solid tune, country for sure, and might have a christian placement opportunity especially--but you need more instrumentation that is "country" if that's the direction you're heading, might be just fine for christian as is (says the atheist!! LOL)--you have the song man, just the production may IMHO need to have more c/w insrumentation.but whoever produced this did a helluva clean job, can't complain about that--i'd add some steel, and a bit more lead country guitar as well,but man i'm glad you're here!! nice job. obviously well produced. IMHO i'd just like it more "country and and bit more twang."all the best!warren

djdale · Post by **djdale** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:28 pm

Hey Warren! Thanks! Well i hired the best players in Nashville and a Grammy nominated producer. Demo singer is the (now) country superstar Buddy Jewell.I thought at the time it could have a christian cross-over possibility, so I opted to leave out the steel. There is a fiddle in the mix.I learned a while ago that Nashville can 'hear' a sound produced and played by Nashville players.Dale

cameron · Post by **cameron** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:33 pm

Oct 21, 2008, 3:50pm, matthoggard wrote:I was drawn in immediately and it held my attention right to the end.Got my fingers crossed for you on this one. I think its as good as anything i hear on the radio these days.M~I felt the same way about it Dale!Cam

cameron · Post by **cameron** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:36 pm

Oct 21, 2008, 5:54pm, djdale wrote:Thanks for all your praise! This really means much to me. If I can get the screener to coincide and give me a forward! Wah hoo!How long does it take for screeners to get to you submission?DaleOn average it seems to take about 3 to 4 weeks after the closing of the listing.

djdale · Post by **djdale** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:43 pm

Thanks for the info Cam. Good to hang here with more country writers!Dale Ray (BMI)

jay10music · Post by **jay10music** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:35 am

DALE...I'm with wta on this one ..I think he said it all...Jay.......

djdale · Post by **djdale** » Thu Oct 23, 2008 6:30 am

Thaks for all the nice comments, they got my hopes up on this one!Dale

jwebbinspired · Post by **jwebbinspired** » Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:30 pm

That was a great song. I was really, really impressed. Somebody will pick that one up.

djdale · Post by **djdale** » Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:35 pm

Wow, thanks for the encouraging words. I haven't gotten the critique back yet on THIS TIME, and do not know if it has been forwarded yet or not. My other post of ODDS ARE is in the same listing so (and still no word yet), hopefully it will get forwarded too!BTW, Andy, I listened to your song "You're Still the Lord" and think it's supurb! I'm sorry I didn't comment on it on your thread. I hope you get a cut with it.I'm glad we have some country fans on the board as well.God Bless,Dale

Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Re: Critique it 'This Time'

Who is online