Critique it 'This Time'

[djdale]

Quote:i'm noticing a lack of new (or used...LOL) songs for us folks to critique, a definite dip in what maybe used to be TOO MANY, but heck, i might be wrong here, but there just doesn't seem to be as many posts of tunes on peer to peer as there used to be...just an observation, maybe incorrect, but sure seems like it.OK THEN, Warren (and everyone else), please give this a listen through and let me have it (LOL)Actually submitted this one for a listing. I hope the screeners don't read the forums if you have too many negative things to say I haven't figured out how you can stream it, just DL it to you computer and listen. Thanks.It's called THIS TIMEINTROShe told me `Goodbye' at least a dozen timesAnd each time I'd say, `No, please don't leave'Though I was sure she was out the door, she said`What would be different this time'?VERSE 1Do you remember when I went on a bingeRolled my truck into that ditch You thought I was dead and I saidI would get some help that timeCHORUSBut that time was all for showI didn't really want to goI wouldn't admit I couldn't quitWithout some help that timeVERSE 2Then last year we got into a fightI didn't really mean to hurt you that nightThey took me away, locked me up for a dayAnd sent me for help that timeCHORUSBRIDGEI'm down my knees `No, Please don't leave'She opend The Book...I took a look... VERSE 3Said `For three days I've been dry'They all cheered, I began to cryEveryone there knew, including youI would really try this time END CHORUSThis time it's not for showThis time I want to goThis time it's real, I'm gonna healWith God's help this timeThis time it's real, I'm gonna healWith God's...help.......this timewww.taximusic.com/stream/176689/ThisTime.mp3