I'd Love a Review on this Christian Contemp Song

[jchitty]

Hey, Andy....I really like this song....and I can hear the influence of Jimmy Webb in there. Like Jimmy Webb, you tell a story, and I like the fact that you blend a Christian theme with social commentary. I think your lyrics are awesome. I also like the the melody...nice chorus and verse contrast there.Very good job.

[geo]

Hi Andy... cool song.... I don't think the drums are too hot (loud).... coming from a rock angle (mine) so take that for what it's worth....I think some big harmonies on the chorus would give it a nice lift...Sounds clean production wise though the vocal sounds strained on the high notes in the final chorus....Peace, Geo

[jwebbinspired]

Thanks for the feedback guys, from the responses I've received I don't feel it deems me going back and changing minor issues like tweaking the drums or one lyric. But it is very refreshing to know that this song is as good as I thought it was. I needed the boost, thanks.We'll see what Taxi thinks.Andy