How Pale the Moon

linziellen · Post by **linziellen** » Fri Oct 17, 2008 9:52 am

Lovely Mark & Robert sorry, it's doing very well in the charts too!All the best with this one.

wignelson · Post by **wignelson** » Sat Oct 18, 2008 8:09 am

Mark and Robert, this is a fine song you've penned here. No real nits except the first line is unintelligible unless you are reading it.If it were me, I'd just cut and paste the second time you sing it into the first - complete with the little pop!Every now and then I run across a song that makes me say, "Man, I wish I wrote that one."I'm saying it again.Wig

heinsite · Post by **heinsite** » Tue Oct 21, 2008 4:51 pm

hey mark--where the hell was i?just heard this,very cool structure, mostly verse, very short chorus (i'd like to see expanded...but sure that's just me...) a little cool bridge, but again mostly verse...nice lyrics, very nice production, and the quality of this one is that it's structure IS NOT the cookie cutter stuff, IMHO. that's it's strength,grouch did nice job as always on the lyrics, very nice piece all around--and yes the production a bit in need of remix, but hell, i should be so lucky...great job guys, the best,warren

jay10music · Post by **jay10music** » Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:28 am

MARK and the Couch Grouch.. ..I was gonna say just another great song .....But I think this piece deserves special attention....And I'm gonna give it to u .....This piece is absolutely superb....Has every thing A GREAT SONG SHOULD.. Has...Substence...Good Lyrics...Great Vibe.. GOOD JOB DUDES.... jAY....

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