BIG DOGS COMMIN TONIGHT/need more feed

[jay10music]

http://www.taximusic.com/download/17569 ... onight.mp3

[billg]

Good vocals Jay! Your bass playing needs a little work (tighten up dude!) but I think your blues vocals are very impressive!

[jeffgreenleaf]

Cool bluesy VOX!

[heinsite]

runner--who the hell is singing man? is that you? please tell me yes, as you will now be on a friggin' pedestal instead of holdin' the paper cup in your picture. LOL, and for this cool blues piece, i'm going to award you what you love, a virtual beer, and one of dees (do you remember rodney dangerfield?) his friggin' crap made me laugh, don't know why, don't care. very few comics make me laugh out loud, but that guy man...anyway, rodney had a little routine where he just said, "once in awhile, it's good just to get ONE OF THESE! (he said it like "dees") and he'd hold up his hand and give the "ok" sign, the big OK sign...and you got one here man!! i'm given you one of "DEES..." AND ONE OF THESE....a virtual smiley face, as i'm like usual on the wrong posting thingee.all the best, warrenps: and if it AINT YOU SINGING, no prob, the blues is there man!pss: also dug george carlin (RIP), on the other end of the spectrum....

[wignelson]

Great blues vox here, Jay. I hope that's you singing because that's the thing that works best out of this piece.The weak spot is the synth guitar and the pitch wheel that gives it away.You could just make this a keyboard tune if you don't know a player who can lay down some blues licks on the guitar.The organ sounds great, and you could use piano.Lose the fake guitar and I'd say this is worth submitting in blues.I get slammed here at the forum for using fake string patches.I think that's their way of saving me $5.00, and I appreciate it.Good song,Wig

[feaker]

beep beepYou sound sober this time?This is very good again, but I miss the slurring of the lyrics:) Paul

[regulator]

not sure what you're trying to go for here, but you obviously love SRV (me too)vox are sounding distorted, and there's plenty of sibilance, that should be fixedride cymbal sounds square, snare hit too fakethis really need "live" players to make it work, loops aren't gonna cut it i think, this piece is asking or 4 sweaty dudes and a 12 pack with tape rollingyou've got a great start to a blues tune, it would be easy to ramp it up i think

[jay10music]

I JUST WANTED SOME INPUT ON THE SINGING....NOT THE TRACK....i JUST WANTED TO KNOW IF I CAN STILL SING AND IF SO I WOULD SUBMIT...tHE TRACK WAS JUST THROWN TOGETHER FOR THAT REASON ..IF MY VOCALS GET A GOOD GRADE THAN I WILL RE DO THE TRACK AND SUBMIT TO THE DISPATCH LISTING FOR MUDDY WATERS TYPE BLUES..ELVIS HAS LEFT THE BUILDING....

[zoom]

Jay!Solid vocals, man.... just watch your position on the mic, as I think you were almost eating it at times! Also... you might want to put more compression on the vocals to even out the dynamics some more... but overall sounds pretty killer!

[feaker]

bleep beepNo bull, your singing is great.Just wonder why we have never heard it before?What else you hiding pal?I score you a 9.625 out of 10:) (that's 5/8 Paul