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[heinsite]

hey wigs-i really dig the vibe here, i love the verses. and YES I CAN HEAR groban doing a tune just like this. (he's that curly dark haired guy that sings lots of ballads...) can't think of a tune of his though...LOL....now that damned chorus thing, that i hear all the friggin' time:IMHO it does need a lift, and 2 more lines, immediately i heard a 3rd line saying something like:and they sang don't give your lovin' too lightlymost of all don't you hold backbecause if you do ever so slightly...and i don't have a rhyme for "back" OTTOMH... LOLthat "ever so slightly" just screamed at me though, damn, like it came from the sky, (spooky, sorry...)so whatever, off the top of my bald head...i love the melody, just work on more of a chorus lift, and add a couple lines. that's all i got...great job!warren