OPINIONS PLEASE!!

[cameron]

Sept 30, 2008, 5:46am, billg wrote:Hey Matt, I would drop the brand name trucks only because it seems redundant to me to return to that theme after the great line "Their pickup trucks are the tools of the tradeYes by God theyre American made" . . . it would be okay if the brand names trucks followed that line but you interrupted the thought with the "built . . . own two hands" line. Good lyrics though, I think it perfectly paints the picture you were going for.Matt, I gotta agree with what Bill says here.Cam

[geo]

Hi Matt....This looks good, you paint nice imagery with your lyrics.... my only concern is the hook....Another day in the life of a country manI think it's a little generic..... I admit I'm not a "country man" myself (couldn't resist ) .... but I think if you were more specific ... like....Another day in the life of a West Texas manor....Just another day for a West Texas country manSee what I'm saying .... I think it would make the hook more memorable....Just a thought..... don't forget to post the version with music!!!Peace, Geo

[matthoggard]

Great points everyone!I was wondering about these same things myself.lyrics are getting reworked.Thanks so much!!M~