Same Shirt Different Day (added Taxi critique)

[cameron]

Hi gang,Just finished this tune tonight. It's meant to be country hence the backhoe references. My ears are fried right now and I suppose tomorrow I'll hear things that need fixing, but any opinions are much appreciated.As usual, keep in mind that I'm a songwriter (arguably) and not a singer. Mostly interested in what the song needs and whether it warrants a pro demo. If so, could I use this home recording with some tweaks and real vocals?Thanks!Camhttp://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_id=1708 ... m=trueSame Shirt Different DayEvery morning after I get upI make my coffee and I pour a cupI walk the dog and I feed the catand I start out every day like thatHead for the kitchen right at half past sixto eat my Pop Tart and my bowl of Trixthen I put on on my boots and my company shirtand make the 20 minute drive to workSame shirt, different dayone of these times I'm going to run awayI'm gonna head to the Florida Keys to staysame shirt, different dayScrape the ice off the ChevroletLooks like the traffic's pretty bad todayand the tire on my backhoe is going flatseems I start out everyday like thatI can work up a sweat in my polo shirtbut I look real nice while I shovel dirtI keep her clean, she's easy careand every minute of the day she's thereSame shirt, different dayI'd like to pack it up and go awayto spend all of my time on some island baysame shirt, different dayAnd damn I look goodBut it's sure gettin' oldEveryday just deeper in the hole Same shirt, different daytoo much work and too little pay still I fire up my backhoe and dig awaysame shirt, different day