Is my song Ships Of Wood Dated ???

mojobone · Post by **mojobone** » Tue May 27, 2008 7:19 pm

Absolutely great! Evocative; it really took me someplace! Not at all dated; great instrument sounds never go out of style, love those intervals in the vocal harmonies that 'rub'. Oh, and, " ...slips away like fog from water..." ? Such a poetic turn of phrase, I'm totally stealing that!

cameron · Post by **cameron** » Tue May 27, 2008 7:36 pm

I agree... nothing dated about that. Great production too. I guess I'd like to hear the vocals brought forward in the mix just a tad though.Cameron

linziellen · Post by **linziellen** » Tue May 27, 2008 8:19 pm

Wonderful, to my ears this is not dated at all. The lyrics slip so nicely into the music and the music really takes you away over the water. Great!Linzi

hazineju · Post by **hazineju** » Wed May 28, 2008 3:02 am

i thought it was awesome and definitely not dated. great melody and vocal performance too.

bwrenhewmach · Post by **bwrenhewmach** » Sat May 31, 2008 3:04 am

I want to thank you all for taking the time to listen to Ships Of Wood. This song is pretty much my life experience in a nut shell. Like Fire And Rain was to Sweet baby James. The song is doing well. It went to #1 on Soundclick World Celtic and #4 on the World Music chart. It stands at # 3 on the Broadjam World Celtic top ten list. Most people on these sites are young so you all are right the song must not be dated. I new when I came to this forum to hear from the music experts they would set me right.

Thanks Mild Bill

geo · Post by **geo** » Sat May 31, 2008 5:59 am

Very nice, doesn't sound dated but agree with Cameron on pushing the vocals up a tad..... relly good song...Peace, Geo

lqrose · Post by **lqrose** » Sat May 31, 2008 6:43 am

WOW....this is beautiful.I'm going to Ellis Island for the first time on Tuesday (although I'm in New York half the year.) Your song is haunting and captures the wonder I think my ancestors sailing in from Sweden so long ago might have felt. I'm feeling the wonder as I listen to it.Beautiful...Lqrose

liamkelly · Post by **liamkelly** » Sat May 31, 2008 8:35 am

BillI'm certainly no expert but (as many above me have said) I just don't get anything dated from this.Uplifting yes, hard to define (in a good way) yes. Beautiful, well yes. Dated, no.Liam

bwrenhewmach · Post by **bwrenhewmach** » Sat Jun 07, 2008 3:57 pm

Thanks for taking the time to have a listen geo, lqrose, liamkelly You all are very kind. I was hoping my follow artist of such caliber would like this songit is a song straight from the heart. It shows me that feel can somtimes override form. Take care and thanks again. Mild Bill

jay10music · Post by **jay10music** » Sun Jun 08, 2008 10:40 am

BILL.......I think this is just a soothing smooth sounding piece....It could easly go for TV Listing or even on a cd... I dosen't sound dated to me, and think you have a great future ahead of u.! Really good stuff......j ..roadrunner

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