Re: new tune--trying to load again

cameron · Post by **cameron** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:03 pm

Warren, it worked for me the first time. I was preparing a reply but then it was gone and my reply wouldn't post.Cam

heinsite · Post by **heinsite** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:04 pm

ok, let me try for the 10th time to repost it--i thought if i couldn't open it, nobody could, hell...whNEW TARP ON OUR TRAILER TONIGHThttp://www.broadjam.com/artists/home.php?artis ... %20.mp3New Tarp On Our Trailer Tonight Verse 1I took a chance and checked on youI was gone too longOn your face I saw what I had hopedThe hurt I caused you had finally faded onWith a teary smile you held the tarp and ropeChorusThat nasty storm blew in right on timeJust let it poor the anger's goneYour smiling eyes still shineYou never looked so lovelyIt's never felt so rightThere's a new tarp on our trailer tonight(small inst. bridge)Verse 2We feel the thunder shake these walls as we drink our beers.We talk about the days I stayed awayIn this dim old trailer lightWe talked about that stupid fightThank God you smiled when I asked to stayChorus X2Outro VerseI took a chance and checked on youI was gone too long. . .don't know if this works, if you can open it, let 'er rip...right now i CAN'T...

bwrenhewmach · Post by **bwrenhewmach** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:08 pm

Warren Like I have told you before I love this song. The picture you paint puts you right there at the trailer in a wooded area on a stormy night being privy to the conversation. Very visual song. You did good. mild BillPS Go Cowboys

heinsite · Post by **heinsite** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:19 pm

thanks mild man, but i can't open it, don't know if anybody can, will try again tomorrow...wh

bwrenhewmach · Post by **bwrenhewmach** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:30 pm

Warren is the song on your broadjam site? If it is all you have to do is go to your site and at the top of the page copy the the http link and paste it to your post.

cameron · Post by **cameron** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:30 pm

Warren,It opens for me OK now. You crack me up buddy. I love the fact that you do whatever the hell you want instead of writing c/w songs that sound like they were written by a committee (like most of the stuff you hear on the radio). I like the tune a lot, and the serious melody with the tarp lyrics make it kind of a c/w parody. Don't know if you ever heard of Gurf Morlix (gurfmorlix.com-- whose songs include "I'm gonna have to sleep with your sister"-- actually just called "Your Sister") but somehow you remind me of him. I don't see much chance of conventional country acceptance (but who knows??) but hell, there's this great station in Dallas (www.khyi.com) that plays all kinds of great stuff, including Gurf, and I bet they would play this too.The vocalist, Mike Kelley, is the same guy I used on Rather Be Lucky Than Good. He does nice work here too.Not sure if everyone else will get the humor, but it works for me.Cam

heinsite · Post by **heinsite** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 1:06 am

thanks cam (and bill, again, mr. texas GO 49ers, 20 years ago...you must be a computer nerd in disguise, i'll try that idea...when i get it posted on 'jam...)yeah cam, thanks for the compliment. LOL! actually though the tune was written as a serious one, hell people do live in trailers, and i risked some thinking i was trashing the trailer folks, and trying to parady some c/w tunes, when not at all (well, not mostly anyway.)yeah, i was happy with Kelley, didn't know he was the singer on yours. it came out a bit on the "young" sounding side, but is ok for now. thank you much for listening.it 5 am here and i'm gunna try to fix whatever the friggin problem is i'm having...glad SOMEBODY heard it, and responded--hey, and cool info on khyi, i'll look into them! all the best,warren

feaker · Post by **feaker** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 6:42 am

WarrenYou are the busy one dude.Really like the tune. Excellent productionWithout the strings it has a slight Eagles sound.I like the progression down after the words "on time"Great singer. No excess verb. My favorite is:"You never looked so lovelyIt's never felt so right"Nobody else writes/produces like you.As you would say, "all the best"Paul

jay10music · Post by **jay10music** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:12 am

WAR MAN.....bLOWS THE OLD r-MAN AWAY AGAIN........ I read the lyrics before I streamed the song, and said what is this.... Then I listened to the track and those lyrics just came alive.... This is a great song again....The vocal guy is just right .....the music is perfect....plus great production...It's like a hit record your listening to on the radio..... U have come to your own my man.... STAY THE COURSE.....U Have Arrived Warren.....Jay.....

heinsite · Post by **heinsite** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 10:02 am

pablo and runner--thank you much for the kind words--ALWAYS appreciated! yes, though i picked the singer and worked closer than ever with the producer (and have learned you REALLY need to do that with demos, even non-master quality--) this demo was well done by jimi and the entire crew in nashville. without being there myself (i can't play, but i can definitely tell somebody what i want--LOL!, it's the next best thing. so as i said, anything one doesn't like, is truly my own damned fault, spent allot of phone time with them and i'm happy with what i told them to do--but we learn more and more, no?thanks again for your encouragement guys,warren