Care to critique my country demo?

pesmitty · Post by **pesmitty** » Thu Jan 03, 2008 7:44 pm

Thanks a ton, matto. This is precisely the reason I left the comfort of the opinons of my friends and family and came here. I will conisder everything you siad and see what I can do to improve the songs. Interesting, though, that you think Dream is so much better than Is It Too Late, as the general response so far has been greater for Is It Too Late. But Aub and you have me thinking that I might put more effort into Dream and see what happens. Keep the honesty coming, folks. I think that is what people truly want, even if they sort of don't

heinsite · Post by **heinsite** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 1:25 pm

hi perry, i never do this, but coulnd't resist the listen--very nice vibe, very nice everything actually, however from my experience (and i'll attach one of my country tunes...) taxi screeners would probably say the biggest fault might be that you are not being specific enough as to WHY the breakup. but that's just my opinion, after being turned down a million times... , but again, very nice demo. i hire for my country a firm out of nashville, and i like that they stay true to my tunes, but add that c/w sound, and the more authentic vox as well. anyway, good luck, again, i really like the tune, except for what i think might be the only problem...heinsite (warren)i'm going to give you my site on taxi, and click "Second Chance" or "I Still Miss Her Kiss" for what i'm trying to get passed the screeners, or even "Way"...http://taximusic.com/heinsiteps; sorry, wrong site map, try http://taxi.com/heinsite

johnnydean1 · Post by **johnnydean1** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 2:10 pm

Quote:www.myspace.com/perrysmithmusicSong starts automatically ("Is It Too Late")I would love to return the favor, so provide a link for me if you would like a critique from a music fan's perspective (I am no expert). Thanks all,PerryRe: Care to critique my country demo?No,but thanks for asking!

johnnydean1 · Post by **johnnydean1** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 2:23 pm

Quote:No worries. Anytime.Good answer!!!!! Great songs!!!I prefer,Is It Too Late.

paults · Post by **paults** » Wed Jan 09, 2008 3:46 pm

How about at www.taxi.com/pesmitty ? Here it is, I think:http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... tream=true

pesmitty · Post by **pesmitty** » Wed Jan 09, 2008 4:38 pm

Damn. Probably should have come up with that one! Thanks.