Songs for review

[djp6783]

This is my first post to this forum. Only having been in Taxi for a short time, I'd like some words from you all. Let me know what you think.www.myspace.com/dominicpesceThanksDom

[geo]

Hey Dom,Cut the feeling - is a pretty decent song, nice production and good hook.Welcome aboard, if I might suggest you'll get more responses picking one song, posting lyrics and giving a little direction (post the listing if it's a submission, etc). Again welcome aboard, poke around, listen to and comment on other members music , good luck... Geo

[heinsite]

hey dom, this is a very good tune, very "now" sounding. my only comment is that it's a bit too "long." a button ending coming in before you start the fade would "fix" that and you're done, since i think the fade is too long. my opinion only, trying to think like a screener. now i need to do the same to my own tunes.again, great job. heinsite out

[vicky]

Hey there,I listened to the first two so far.....very well recorded; I especially like the vocal and the background vocal on My Contention.. I'm with heinsite on the length and ending on Cut the Feeling...What listing you're going for can dictate the extra stuff you do to the songs....for example length and endings....I'm new here....I think you have a very good songs....when a listing comes up, I suggest posting beforehand, so you can get input on being right for the listing....that is one of the challenges around here....good luck,Vicky

[djp6783]

Thanks for all of your input. I will make my submissions singular and with more emphasis on proper listings. Also, I will tighten up those endings and try to think like a screener. I had one rejection for a listing so far and was considering the custom critique of the songs for more input. Have any of you gone this route prior to listing?Dom