Rock Staff Writer -- Take Two
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Here we go... the saga continues... One day left...still have some tweaking for "Save Me" before mastering it, but here's the latest version of...I Believe I BelieveAny closer?
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Quote:Here we go... the saga continues... One day left...still have some tweaking for "Save Me" before mastering it, but here's the latest version of...I Believe I BelieveAny closer?Aub, no matter WHAT happens with this listing, THIS has HUGE potential for the CCM market. It seemed almost too big, too spiritual for the sort of music this listing is asking for, but I LOVED this one (on this, my first listen).Ted
The truest of tears
Seem to me to be the ones
Shed in gratitude
-Haiku by TF, 1982
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Shed in gratitude
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Quote:Here we go... the saga continues... One day left...still have some tweaking for "Save Me" before mastering it, but here's the latest version of...I Believe I BelieveAny closer?Wow, this rocks much more than the version I heard yesterday. Might want to bring the vox up a tiny notch since songwriting is the aim here, let them hear the words. Wild playing there, Ponch. Call me crazy but there's a flavour of Aerosmith in this.There's something about the chorus that's bugging me a bit. Not sure if I can put my finger on it. I wonder if it's the intervals & how the voice negotiates them. I'd suggest singing 'I believe in higher love, something more that we can (go up) dream of...' also, I suggest you change the last "I believe, I believe" to a soaring "I belieeeeeeeeve". That's what I long to hear. Of course I know this is 'only a demo' but...It's definitely got the "Gypsy Van" touch - great work guys.Hummin'bird PS - Aub, I sent you an email.
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Hey Aub,This song is ROKKKIN' like DOKKEN!!Sorry for the 80's reference ! I completely dig the guitar work on this song. I really miss good rock guitar players. Ponch has a marvelous tone!I fricking LURVE this song regardless of whether it hits the mark!!!Great work!No more comments, too busy rockin out! Cisco
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ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY PONCH!!!!Still rockin' out! Cisco
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Quote:ALL HAIL THE MIGHTY PONCH!!!!Still rockin' out! CiscoYou know... the scary thing is that Ponch is holding back because he doesn't want to "show off". As he says... "just simple on this one" Aub
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Cisco, man thanks a lot, I'm glad that you like the songthanks again,Ponch
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In all the rush to submit... I just realized that I didn't post final versions. For all who have followed this quest, and especially those who have offered input THANK YOU!!!Hate Me Save MeI Believe I Believe Here's to Aub and Ponch, the newest staff writers for XXXXXXXX Music Group edited because I tweaked the Hate Me Save Me master a bit...
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Quote:Great stuff - good luck to both of you. It is interesting hearing the songs evolve over time. Nice work Aub and Ponch.Michael, Thanks for checking out the music and yes hopefully we can make it. thanks again
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