My First Music Post

[ciskokidd]

Hey Everyone,This is one my latest pop tracks and I wanted to get an overall opinion on the tune from you guys. Feel free to make any comments on the tune from production to melody to lyric to performance.I am not easily offended and very open minded so give me your honest thoughts and critiques.I am really interested on what you think this qualifies as. Is it singer/songwriter, is it just a pop song, adult contempo?I am having the darndest time figuring this one out.Thanks in advance.http://www.taximusic.com/song.php?song_ ... iscoEDIT-- Sorry - forgot the lyric:Tea With Mad Hattersc2007 Rodriguez/Carlsson/PewznerRumor has it I fell in loveBut I don't know whenSuddenly I'm under your spellPulling me into wonderlandWith long, slow kisses I'm tumbling downFalling hopelessly into your armsWhen I'm with you nothing else mattersAnd it's true, I'm lost and I'm tangled up in blueIt's tea with mad hattersAnd it's valentines full of butterfliesTruth be told that cynical smileCan take my breath awayThe power in your beautiful eyesPulls me close and we're face to faceWith long, slow kisses I'm tumbling downFalling hopelessly into your armsWhen I'm with you nothing else mattersAnd it's true, I'm lost and I'm tangled up in blueIt's tea with mad hattersAnd it's valentines full of butterfliesMy love I lose myself in youPeople say I'm so in loveWell it must be true cuz...Repeat Chorus to end

[dgolding]

Hiya,Well I enjoyed it. Great voice, catchy tune and the production sounds tight. Good job

[squidlips]

Cisco!! Pretty, pretty, pretty! And her voice is great. I'd consider film/tv, singer/songwriter (did she help write it? cuz if she didn't, don't think it qualifies for that then) and maybe adult comtempo and artist pitches like maybe Kelly Clarkson.

[ciskokidd]

Quote:Cisco!! Pretty, pretty, pretty! And her voice is great. I'd consider film/tv, singer/songwriter (did she help write it? cuz if she didn't, don't think it qualifies for that then) and maybe adult comtempo and artist pitches like maybe Kelly Clarkson.Thanks squiddie! I appreciate the comments and help.She did cowrite but gave up on the artist thing a few years back. Maybe I can convince her to get back in...hmmm?Warmest regards,Cisco

[ciskokidd]

Quote:Hiya,Well I enjoyed it. Great voice, catchy tune and the production sounds tight. Good job Thanks David!! I'm glad you liked it.Best,Cisco