Now I'm Down In London

[stevelane]

Ok I have decided to put this lyric up just to get critics.It has no music for it yet but I need to learn all I can any responce's most welcome.© Lyrics by S. Lane ( Sep 2007 ) rygarone@aol.comTitle: Now I'm Down In LondonUnderneath an archFeeling a little parchWhile busy people are getting wet fastLooking at a clockOver a river and dockWondering how long this weather will last(Chorus)Now I'm down in LondonI don't recall what brought me hereLost me beer thought I was by our pierI'm not Shaw what to do Remember being with my matesAll out drinking till lateMaybe Its time to goSouth east back to FelixstoweLooks like I have been in a fightThe state of my shirtCovered in dirtBut I think it was my stag night(Chorus)Now I'm down in LondonI don't recall what brought me hereLost me beer thought I was by our pierSet-up I wasThey must of had it plannedTook my wallet keys and phoneI can't even contact home Its a long walk won't be back by lunchSouth east for the headingCould be late for my weddingI must tell the bride who's 60 miles away (Chorus)Now I'm down in LondonI don't recall what brought me hereLost me beer thought I was by our pierFound a pound in my pocket with a gold locketHope that will settle the score on her big dayNow I'm down in LondonThanx allSteve

[nknjmes]

Very funny story! Nice job!

[stevelane]

Thanx for your reply nknjmesI just had the first 6 lines which I thought were abit corney.The clock I was looking at by the way was big ben on a rainy day.Steve