little help?

[dominic]

ok hello thereMy name is Dominic. Im a songwriter who does alternative, rock and other kinds of music and I am trying to start doing more music for commercials and soundtrack stuff.I am still relatively new to taxi and have submitted a few songs but have only received one forward with no results so far.So Id like to open up the floor and ask any of you who feel like helping me out to speak up. (but be gentle)Please give some of my music a listen and tell me whats good and what needs work. (again please be gentle ) Id appreciate any feedback.ThanksDominichttp://www.taximusic.com/hosting/home.php?artist=sweetnothing