Surf song for review

[rick]

New Surf Song for review.Let me know what is right and what I need to fix to make this work.Thanks!!!!!!!The song is called SURFIN'.www.taxi.com/rickhile

[hummingbird]

Hi Rick - not able to give any feedback because the song isn't showing on your hosting page. Go into "music" and click on "edit" next to the song title and check that you've got a tick in the "public" boxcheersHummin'bird

[rick]

GRRRR!!!!! This is really odd because when I click on it shows up.Just my luck another computer glitch.Thanks HB

[hummingbird]

Quote:GRRRR!!!!! This is really odd because when I click on it shows up.Just my luck another computer glitch.Thanks HBIt's one of those wierd things I don't understand - you have to toggle your screen for the rest of the list to reveal itself. I've had the same problem when trying to submit a piece of music that doesn't seem be there although I know it's there - have to move the corners of my window in order for it to show up.Your song has a surfin' vibe, and it definitely has some of the elements I expect to hear - but they don't reach out and grab me with a sense of sand & sea & girls & fun. You've got a good base, and I like what you have. I think you just need to be a little more imaginative with it & have a more variation. Check this out for an idea of what I mean --http://taxi.proboards27.com/index.cgi?b ... ummin'bird Let me know if you post

[rick]

Quote:Quote:GRRRR!!!!! This is really odd because when I click on it shows up.Just my luck another computer glitch.Thanks HBIt's one of those wierd things I don't understand - you have to toggle your screen for the rest of the list to reveal itself. I've had the same problem when trying to submit a piece of music that doesn't seem be there although I know it's there - have to move the corners of my window in order for it to show up.Your song has a surfin' vibe, and it definitely has some of the elements I expect to hear - but they don't reach out and grab me with a sense of sand & sea & girls & fun. You've got a good base, and I like what you have. I think you just need to be a little more imaginative with it & have a more variation. Check this out for an idea of what I mean --http://taxi.proboards27.com/index.cgi?b ... ummin'bird Let me know if you post Thanks all your points are well taken.