input on new song

[gundersen]

Quote:Matt! BWHAHAHAH!! Good description. Cliff:I really LOVE the harmonies on this. Well done. I'd bet they're gonna give you grief about the lyrics.....you stop at "last day we'll ever...." ever what? (they'll say)It sounds like elec-tech to me too. If you added some verses, you could release both versions to different listings. Something to think about. Nice melody there, great harmonies, good groove.SquidMatt, yeah I know...but that was intentional...the idea was "last day we'll ever"..."whatever" is going on in your life during the last days of your summer. I like the idea of letting the listener decide what they think the song is about...Thanks Matt, I really appreciate you taking the time to listen.Cliff Gundersen

[gundersen]

Quote:Quote:Matt! BWHAHAHAH!! Good description. Cliff:I really LOVE the harmonies on this. Well done. I'd bet they're gonna give you grief about the lyrics.....you stop at "last day we'll ever...." ever what? (they'll say)It sounds like elec-tech to me too. If you added some verses, you could release both versions to different listings. Something to think about. Nice melody there, great harmonies, good groove.SquidOPPS...sorry Squid, let me start over now that I realize who I'm talking to.Squid, yeah I know...but that was intentional...the idea was "last day we'll ever"..."whatever" is going on in your life during the last days of your summer. I like the idea of letting the listener decide what they think the song is about...Thanks Squid, I really appreciate you taking the time to listen.Cliff Gundersen

[squidlips]

Yeah, I got that. I've tried doing that in the past with the reviewers and they never failed to tell me that it doesn't work if we assume listeners are going to figure it out for themselves. Natch, we're really talking about the people in the process who listen, not the actual end listeners.