the Outsider

[sgs4u]

Quote:As an arranger I would suggest at one point slowing the tempo and giving a slight pause just before the last chorus, it felt a bit rushed there and I wanted to emotionally digest the part about the pen, the pain and the tears. As a listener I trust the chorus is coming so no need to get right to it at that point.Mazz This is a brilliant idea Mazz, worthy of exploring, Because that last chorus doesn't need to be exacly the same as the others, it could be deeper, dynamically. thx Mr Mazz Fast Forwards!(you know what I mean)

[sgs4u]

Quote:Steve,Just to clarify my suggestion: I meant a ritard towards the end of the section before the last chorus, a pause while the chord rings out and then back to the original tempo for the last chorus. The chorus could still be deeper dynamically but I don't think it needs to be at a slower tempo than the rest of the song, although it might be worth a try!Take care of that sunburn!Mazz Didn't need clarification, but thanks. Great minds think alike. I'm just so lousy at clearly responding with typing. A rit in that exact spot is indeed what I thought you meant. I'm also thinking the first 2 lines of the chorus right after that, don't need to come in as big as the other choruses. Just adding little more tenderness. The last chorus being a slower tempo all the way out would be a bit of a death knell to the vibe... ps: I love your new quotes!